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firstfall → pompomwoop
LOL TYPO (AND*). My bad, how embarrassing. And yeah, delving into emotions is an effective way of presenting the story more vividly. When you do explore their emotions, you did a fabulous job - just increase the frequency I suppose. Try using more similes or personifying inanimate objects to heighten a certain effect you want to create.
Jun 05 2011 06:06 PM
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