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firstfall → pompomwoop
When I said a different method. I meant as opposed to just using adjectives to show how messy a room was, bring us readers deeper into it. Like, if a room was messy for example, instead of just saying catastrophically distraught and unhygienic.
You can describe how the room looked with a handful of specific things.
You can describe how the room looked with a handful of specific things.
Jun 05 2011 06:02 PM
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