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I told esha I didn't want to post it. I think it was a warm-up one-shot honestly... I wasn't ecstatic bout posting it. The ending basically is Taeyeon writing in Tiffany's diary... so the ending implies they get back together on the 24th of december. Yeah, a lot of people didn't get that part. It was a subtle fluff on my part.
Hey! Just read your latest update :) loved it. I left you a comment there. But a made a slight mistake which I wanna clear up here. I told you in the comment that I was gonna rate it 5 stars which I do, but I seriously accidentally clicked 4. Don't hate me :( but just for the record it should definitely be a 5. Sorry!
when I say jumbled, what I mean is that you could add a little more space between the paragraphs. The dialogue should be a little bit more separated, to give your fic a cleaner look as well as minimize confusion. I actually think the plot will be pretty interesting, it's just changing your formatting may make your readers feel more comfortable when reading and they may understand the plot better.