-joyride
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-joyride → bobalub
nah~ i don't write :D i leave that to that people that write well haha xD
Jul 17 2011 06:19 PM
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bobalub → -joyride
mmm the couple thing was why i originally why i wrote it. but im glad you liked it ^____^. do you write yourself?
Jul 11 2011 07:46 PM
-joyride → bobalub
lol :D your writing is good, you should share it more often! ahhhhhh~ i get it! hahaa... it seems clear now that you tell me. but i think its nice you left the poem itself slightly vague about the relationships. to which the reader could have related it with not just couples, but maybe with friendships or relationships with family~ having a bad end and having to meet up again later? xD
Jul 11 2011 12:30 PM
bobalub → -joyride
their first time meeting was when they became friends and began dating. but then they broke up (a harsh one at that), and became strangers once again. so when they saw each other after awhile, it felt like it was the first time seeing each other (hence being strangers) and all the memories that they both tried to get rid of came rushing in. FIN! ahaha i cant really explain it that well. it all
Jul 11 2011 11:50 AM
bobalub → -joyride
hmm i dont think my school has one..but ssf is kind of like a trial thing. im slowly opening up but i feel kinda ehhh since not much ppl have commented on my poems. youre the first! ahah well ill just go with the flow. i wasnt expecting much anyhow :P
okay so the poem is about a broken up couple. in the poem, the memories are what barges in. so the title is like what you said.
okay so the poem is about a broken up couple. in the poem, the memories are what barges in. so the title is like what you said.
Jul 11 2011 11:46 AM
-joyride → bobalub
you should be more open with your writing(: ~ in my school, we have a lit.mag where people submit their writings.. you should do that if your school has one! :D i enjoy your writing a lot .. ive always liked the "unusually difficult to get at first, but once you get it, everything's clear" types of writing
Jul 11 2011 09:46 AM
-joyride → bobalub
:D Honestly, after reading Second First Meeting a couple times.. all i can tell from it is having sudden feelings? or in such a way that would be ironic~ haha.. but connected to Second First Meeting.. hmm. Is it relating to a second meeting with a person that actually feels like the first meeting? xD i think it'd be easier if you explain it for me.. i'd love to understand haha :D
Jul 11 2011 09:44 AM
bobalub → -joyride
sorry i never had anyone actually appreciate my work...so this is my first time. thankyou so much! i feel so bubbly :3
Jul 10 2011 07:58 PM
bobalub → -joyride
Ahhh yeahhh. youre too kind though, i dont deserve such attention! lol and yesh smiling is essential to a healthy life :P.
btw, do you understand the poem Second First Meeting? I mean, like how the poem and title connects? Idunno i feel like its too generic and broad for anyone to understand.....but i can explain it to you if you want. hehe im enjoying this too much!
btw, do you understand the poem Second First Meeting? I mean, like how the poem and title connects? Idunno i feel like its too generic and broad for anyone to understand.....but i can explain it to you if you want. hehe im enjoying this too much!
Jul 10 2011 07:57 PM
