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omplexedsimplicity → watang
i know you mentioned that a happy SNSD is important too, but in my opinion, how this story begun and how it is structured makes it hard to please everyone. I can only imagine a quiet & mature acceptance sort of ending. oh well, ALL THE BEST! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next.
song recommendation : Carrie Underwood - Look at Me (I hope you like it as much as I do :D)
song recommendation : Carrie Underwood - Look at Me (I hope you like it as much as I do :D)
Jul 05 2010 11:56 PM
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omplexedsimplicity → watang
I love your emotionally charged chapters. but what Jessi did was so noble and leaning a little towards unbelievable in your latest chap! She must be a saint to be willing to risk the chance of not being chosen and still wait! comment #333 nicely summed up the situation. take your time to work this story out. but love triangles are messy and are bound to have heartbreaks (& disgruntled readers).
Jul 05 2010 11:52 PM
watang → omplexedsimplicity
Actually i'm unemployed right now.. so i'm free, other than having to do the job-hunting, spending time with the bf and catching up with friends part.. honestly the added chaps will serve to explain things clearer and develop the subplots better too.. so i don't mind.. its just actually figuring out how to make it work..
Jul 05 2010 08:43 PM
omplexedsimplicity → watang
watang! There's really no need to erm...re-write the plot/story if you already have one in mind. I'm sure the story you have would come out fine and dandy too. I'm sure you're busy with school/work and I don't want to be hunted down by fellow readers for slower updates etc. (just joking :D)
but whatever your decision is, I'll stand by it. I'd definitely respect your writer's creativity.
but whatever your decision is, I'll stand by it. I'd definitely respect your writer's creativity.
Jul 04 2010 05:56 AM
watang → omplexedsimplicity
Sigh... you make me stressed.. i originally wanted to end the story at like chap 24 or something... but it looks like it'll extend now.. just thought of a different arc now.. it'll develop other storylines better this way.. i'm sure i'll keep up the drama.. but i'm not sure if it'll be on the same level.. it'll prob take longer for me to update now cos i hae to rethink stuff..
Jul 04 2010 05:40 AM
omplexedsimplicity → watang
I caught a glimpse of your potential to bring out emotional intensity in your latest chapter and I thought if you bank on that, it would make the story better (in comparison to happy fluff) (: but it's all in my subjective opinion. I don't know about other readers, but I do prefer a more realistic ending than merely a happy one. I'm sure you'll do a great job! I have faith in your story.
Jul 03 2010 07:40 AM
watang → omplexedsimplicity
hmmm.. darker more depressive.. i'll think bout it.. its not where i'm heading towards.. i do what them all to be happy.. happy SNSD is impt to me.. but i'll think on it.. i do know i'm better at writing drama so we'll just see how things go..
Jul 02 2010 09:04 PM
omplexedsimplicity
Hi watang, I hope you see this. I posted twice on your comment section, but all that appears is "..." I don't know if there is a technical error or something. But I commented that I was expecting a darker and more depressive vibe in the chapters leading towards the climax as well as recommended Christina Aguilera's Lift Me Up as a good inspiration source. sorry for cluttering up your profile.
Jul 01 2010 08:42 AM
watang → omplexedsimplicity
sorry.. need to clarify.. i'm writing the unplanned chap now.. the TaeNy meeting that i posted up was completely planned..
just between you and me.. i know what the ending is already.. kinda wrote it out already.
Think after the next update i'll look into developing the sub plots..
you don't really sound anything actually.. i'm just asking.. nice to know Soshi fans in s'pore..
just between you and me.. i know what the ending is already.. kinda wrote it out already.
Think after the next update i'll look into developing the sub plots..
you don't really sound anything actually.. i'm just asking.. nice to know Soshi fans in s'pore..
Jul 01 2010 08:03 AM
omplexedsimplicity → watang
i was reading your comment again, and I realised the unplanned chap was referring to JeTi. My apologies.
anyway, I think perhaps even if JeTi don't meet, maybe Jessi watching Taeny on the sidelines or Fany watching TaengSic on the sidelines is good? as a closure perhaps? because what JeTi knew of each other is from Tae's words and how from Tae reacted when the third party is mentioned.
anyway, I think perhaps even if JeTi don't meet, maybe Jessi watching Taeny on the sidelines or Fany watching TaengSic on the sidelines is good? as a closure perhaps? because what JeTi knew of each other is from Tae's words and how from Tae reacted when the third party is mentioned.
Jul 01 2010 07:19 AM
omplexedsimplicity → watang
I'm not much of a writer, but I hope my opinions helps :/ I thought that the unplanned chapter was brilliant actually! with the fresh twist (when Tae called out Jessi's name during the bed scene) that gave us readers and TaengSic shippers a pleasant surprise.
hehe. do I sound Singaporean?
hehe. do I sound Singaporean?
Jul 01 2010 07:00 AM
omplexedsimplicity → watang
I think it's fine, not too draggy yet. but I'm pretty certain readers would like to see Tae make her choice already. do you have the plot on how to end this story in mind? I guess another chap perhaps about Tae struggling with herself and going in depth with her personal thoughts would do some good for the readers that are not too happy about Tae stringing both girls along due to her own confusion
Jul 01 2010 06:57 AM
watang → omplexedsimplicity
Don't you all feel its draggy?? i'm starting to get frustrated with the 3 of them myself.. i kinda wanna just resolve this nicely without excessive drama.. was thinkin of letting JeTi meet but it was kinda pointless to me.. still the readers comments have helped.. i'm adding a unplanned chap cos of it.. so we'll see... you're not Singaporean by any chance are you?
Jul 01 2010 06:17 AM
