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biellasoshi → maliheng
hahaha..im juz tryin my best..^^
And u as a new writer..well, i must say i was really proud of u..Its really gud..REALLY! (lol) haha..
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But only 1 problem~ngee~
Mb u can separate the paragraph a lil'bit?hehe.. Cuz if u make too many line/words in 1 paragraph, it will look too 'full' u kno?hehe..^^
But if u dont want its ok tho..i dun mind ehek..^^"
And u as a new writer..well, i must say i was really proud of u..Its really gud..REALLY! (lol) haha..
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But only 1 problem~ngee~
Mb u can separate the paragraph a lil'bit?hehe.. Cuz if u make too many line/words in 1 paragraph, it will look too 'full' u kno?hehe..^^
But if u dont want its ok tho..i dun mind ehek..^^"
Jun 08 2011 02:11 AM
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