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lackingmoon → marcx
Yo oppa who's ready to be criticized! ROFL jk Your teasers gave me no clue 'bout the story so I have no idea how to critique T_T But oppa, did you realize you tend to jump back 'n forth b/w past tense 'n present tense a little too much? 5 on writing mechanics! lol jokes But I have a feeling Yoong's going to be the guy V_V I'll deduct pts. if it's that way lol Al
Mar 26 2010 11:39 AM
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