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marcx → lackingmoon
Yo critical dongsaeng! Yea, I do realize that... T_T. I should brush up on basic english comp skills before continuing to write haha. I think that's one of my problems while writing. Haha you're taking points off because Yoong's going to be a guy?? Maybe I shouldn't let you grade this after all haha. Yeahhh, I told you I was indecisive about Yoong's age. At first she was 24
Mar 26 2010 01:37 PM
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lackingmoon → marcx
I hate you char limit! Anyway...I was saying Yoong being 28 is a bit too old lol Oh yeah, I usually sleep 14-16 hours a day when I'm free as well haha-your critical dongsaeng who's going to sleep right now, N.O.W
Mar 26 2010 11:41 AM
lackingmoon → marcx
Yo oppa who's ready to be criticized! ROFL jk Your teasers gave me no clue 'bout the story so I have no idea how to critique T_T But oppa, did you realize you tend to jump back 'n forth b/w past tense 'n present tense a little too much? 5 on writing mechanics! lol jokes But I have a feeling Yoong's going to be the guy V_V I'll deduct pts. if it's that way lol Al
Mar 26 2010 11:39 AM
marcx → lackingmoon
Again with the cut off -_-;;. It should say "...think twice before submitting it to you. - Your oppa who's sleepy now cause he woke up too early."
PS.. Curse you, charac limit!
PS.. Curse you, charac limit!
Mar 26 2010 09:11 AM
marcx → lackingmoon
Yo dongsaeng! Hurry and get some sleep soon! Aish..... it got cut off and I didn't even noticed. I was saying... "But then again, Sica babe can sleep for 16 hours". Dislike for the character limit lol. Wow, haha you want another teaser? Hm... How shall we do it.. PM then? :P Haha you can go ahead and grade it (harshly). So that way I would think twice before submitting it to yo
Mar 26 2010 09:09 AM
lackingmoon → marcx
Yo oppa! But then again what??? Your comment got cut off T_T No seriously, I'm so sleepy deprived right now. I still have to stay in school for 4 more hours. Feel like I'm going to faint any minute. Need something to keep me awake. oOo, give me another teaser LOL no jokes. Okay, I'll give you a grade. But maybe I'll curve it by 2 or 3 pts if you can't take criticism lol jk-Sleepyhead
Mar 26 2010 07:32 AM
marcx → lackingmoon
Yo sleep deprived dongsaeng! Are you really back from your hiatus?? Or are you just teasing us all? :p Haha... no, please don't give me a grade... I'd fail T_T. But I suppose I should let you grade it, since I kinda do want to see what you would say. Haha, why don't you just send PMs instead? Or is it still not working for you? If Sica babe can do it, you can do it! But then ag
Mar 26 2010 07:06 AM
lackingmoon → marcx
Darn you char limit! That's why I prefer p.m system. Anyway, I didn't have any sleep last night. Now I know how Sica babe feels T_T-your dongsaeng who desperately needs some sleep
Mar 26 2010 06:57 AM
lackingmoon → marcx
Yo lazy oppa! I'm done w/ my 1 day hiatus ROFL I honestly can't stay away from YoonSic's thread for too long T_T Save me! lol Anyway, you want me to give you a grade after I've finished reading your one-shot? But just so you know, I'm a big jerk =] No, I'll try to be nice since this is like a free gift from you. I'm so exhausted right now. Didn't have any sl
Mar 26 2010 06:56 AM
marcx → lackingmoon
Yo dongsaeng who should study and come back already! Haha yes, I saw it. By Sunday??? Geez... I'll try. T_T I wonder how you would grade my 'exam' lol... but I'm glad this wasn't an actual entry into the contest, or else I'd fail haha. - Your oppa who should be working on the story
Mar 26 2010 03:35 AM
lackingmoon → marcx
Yo ninjar wannabe oppa! Go read my comment directed to you at YoonSic's thread V_V lol-your dongsaeng who should be studying, but not T_T
Mar 26 2010 12:49 AM
marcx → lackingmoon
Yo ninja dongsaeng! lol, I guess we really are like oppa like dongsaeng. Um... I have about maybe 5% haha. I've only typed one page so far, since I'm also trying to update my ongoing as well. Lol, the kids need their umma. And I'm not ready to take on the role of appa yet. Haha. - Your wannabe ninja oppa
Mar 25 2010 01:57 PM
lackingmoon → marcx
Yo oppa who's doing something productive! Though I'm on my hiatus, I'm still watching over YoonSic's thread to check out on my kids. I saw your teaser! afsdfe Whyyy? That sounds like one of the one-shots I have in mind T_T Like oppa, like dongsaeng lol I could see that it's going to be interesting. How many % have you written? Okay, on hiatus now! -YoonSicretive's ninja
Mar 25 2010 11:04 AM
marcx → lackingmoon
Yo on hiatus dongsaeng! Haha, I've decided to totally change the story line :D. As for the byuness level of the story... I don't know yet. Haha. - Your oppa who should be doing something productive
Mar 25 2010 09:11 AM
marcx → lackingmoon
Aish... this thing should be longer. Anyways, I was saying that I might even rewrite the whole thing with a whole new plot now that I know how you grade and what you're looking for haha. - Your oppa who is making a quick recovery
Mar 24 2010 04:47 PM
