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dorisssse → Valim
Because I want to be no.1 on your latest visitors list :) No I just want to see what you're up to
Apr 05 2011 10:43 AM
Valim → dorisssse
Hi Miss~ How may I help you? Why are you viewing my profile everyday? HAHAHAHA!
Apr 05 2011 02:37 AM
Goldilocks → Valim
Thanks! Thanks :D
Tell me about it! I'm not a writer either... that's why I worry quite frantically on a daily basis! lol
Tell me about it! I'm not a writer either... that's why I worry quite frantically on a daily basis! lol
Mar 19 2011 02:07 PM
Valim → Goldilocks
I'll try :D I'm not a writer, just a reader~ Hahah I'll tell you if anything :)
Mar 19 2011 05:21 AM
Goldilocks → Valim
True that! Thanks thanks! :D I shall experiment and seriously tell me if it's too wacky! lol... and if I need any advice I think I'm going to have to run to you ;)
Mar 18 2011 07:44 PM
Valim → Goldilocks
"I find 1st POV challenging and limited cause I can only express things as that character sees fit, ya know what I'm saying?"
And that's the beauty of 1st POV :D You leave the readers guessing what the other is thinking. It's also good for characterization because you know how 1st person feels :)
Either way, it's up to you ;9 Glad I could give you c...
And that's the beauty of 1st POV :D You leave the readers guessing what the other is thinking. It's also good for characterization because you know how 1st person feels :)
Either way, it's up to you ;9 Glad I could give you c...
Mar 17 2011 09:47 PM
Goldilocks → Valim
And truthfully I think I prefer 3rd POV only because I can express other characters better. I find 1st POV challenging and limited cause I can only express things as that character sees fit, ya know what I'm saying? Yo feeling me? *I'm a total wanna be gangster, I'm such a loser, I know >.<* Erm… ANYWAYS… I think you’re awesomeness… Foe Realz! ;)
Mar 17 2011 09:42 AM
Goldilocks → Valim
Yo! No, dude no worries, it wasn't rude at all! Seriously! I like your comments, especially that one. It helped me a lot because I can see where I can improve on and what I should try to avoid, you know? Truth is I’m totally stressing over TBATB because I can't seem to make up my mind on a lot of things, so if the story is out of whack, be like, "Dude, WTH was that!...
Mar 17 2011 09:37 AM
Valim → Goldilocks
You could switch it around and tell the story through everyone's POV. It's really up to you :D You're a new writer so experimenting with different writing styles will be good. But if it gets too tough like you feel something is lacking, write in the POV you're most comfortable with :) You'll slowly develop your own writing style~
Mar 17 2011 09:02 AM
Valim → Goldilocks
Hey! I just went back to see what I reviewed and realise it might have sounded kinda rude D: I hope you are not offended. SSF cut off the other half of what I said and I can't really remember what I said D;
You can experiment with 1st POV yo. It's just a little difficult to write. You don't always have to have it in a certain person's POV.
You can experiment with 1st POV yo. It's just a little difficult to write. You don't always have to have it in a certain person's POV.
Mar 17 2011 09:00 AM
Goldilocks → Valim
Helllloooooo... Hehehe just want to say thanks for the comment on TBATB, I was totally contemplating if I should do POVs or not, but decided to try it anyways. I'm still a bit new so I wasn't sure how it's going to be like, but thanks to your comment I'm probably going to try 3rd POV as I probably have more freedom in telling the story. Just wanted to say thanks, your comment totally helps :)
Mar 17 2011 08:21 AM
Valim → pompomwoop
Ahhhh ;3 Well it's cool~ Hahaha! But since Jay isn't here at IY, I thought Hara would be good. idk~ Just sayin ;3 Either way, whatever inspires you for whatever is alright with me ;9
Mar 16 2011 11:03 PM
pompomwoop → Valim
For the record, I totally ship HaraSic. Have you seen those two on award nights and on that chuseok girl special? O_O Scandalous. Ah, but I've got Jay as Yuri's rival so perhaps not...I don't know lol. Everything is written on the spur of the moment so maybe.
Mar 16 2011 10:44 AM
