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stephanpompomwoop

lol, i really thought you were upset with me for calling you 'meng'. ok from now on, i'm gonna call you 'pom'. and yes, i seriously love how you portray sooyoung and yoona. of course taeyeon too, no one had made taengoo dorkier than how you wrote her to be. pokemon backpack FTW! 8D
Jan 23 2011 02:43 AM
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pompomwoopMelancholicJester

In terms of being the best for "light readers" the first chapter was better than the prologue. DW, when those readers that like action/drama/underworld genres discover Royal Flush, they'll be onto you like a pack of wolves. Personally, I've read action stories and apart from Doppelganger, Black Revolver and a select few, they're really...bland.
Jan 23 2011 12:00 AM
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MelancholicJesterpompomwoop

I know you hate me to death and all, but you'll have to deal for just one more comment. xD
Do you think my fic is a bit... dense? 4 comments, and it's now consigned to the bottom of the 2nd page. And most of the PM list has read. T-T I know it's not bad based on comments (not to sound egotistical or anything), but is it a bit daunting for light readers?
Jan 22 2011 10:57 PM
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MelancholicJesterpompomwoop

-W: Do you understand?!
-H: Of course I understand, my queen.
-W: *slapslapslap* When I hit you in the future, if you dare dodge again... *spams slap* JUST YOU TRY IT AND SEE. *more slaps*
lol xDDD it's just too funny yet sad.
Jan 22 2011 10:34 PM
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MelancholicJesterpompomwoop

... queen. no joke.)
-W: Will you dare make me look like a fool again in the future?
-H: I wouldn't dare.
-W: *slap* LOUDER!
-H: I wouldn't dare!
-W: *slap* SCREW YOU FOR MAKING ME LOOK LIKE A FOOL!!! *slapslapslap* (and repeated shiz)
-H: *tries to dodge a slap*
-W: I will hit wherever I want to hit!
-H: Yes, my queen.
Jan 22 2011 10:34 PM
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MelancholicJesterpompomwoop

-Anchor: And now, a viral video that's become a hot topic on the Internet. This video is about a married couple. The husband missed a [dinner] date, and thus was punished severely by his wife upon his return to their home ...(tharr be more)in the form of 42 biach slaps.
-Wife: Did you know that I waited a long time for you today?
-Hubby: My queen, I know. (He actually says 'my...
Jan 22 2011 10:33 PM
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MelancholicJesterpompomwoop

Lol, when you called yourself a sadist, it reminded me of this video: http://www.56.com/u49/v_NTE3MTc0NjI.html
S&M, much? Either that, or Chinese wives are pure BAMF-in-a-can. xD
Trans coming up :3 in case you're not gifted in knowledge of Mandarin.
Jan 22 2011 10:33 PM
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pompomwoopKougraJetGel

You're pretty sharp LOL. I originally intended the movie to be the 'Devil' because I watched it recently but decided to leave the title out. Since its an English movie, it would've been unrealistic if those who don't speak English eg. Yuri, Taeyeon etc. watched it. There are heaps of movies with old lady killers so haha its by chance you guessed the Devil.
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Jan 22 2011 08:21 PM
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MelancholicJesterpompomwoop

Yeah, we all know how well sarcasm works over the interwebz: not at all. But somehow, through my experiences online, I've developed a knack for conveying said sarcasm. :3
Voices? Uhm... what voices? I have no idea what you're talking about. <_<
THE UPDATE'S A-COMIN'. PATIENCE, YOUNG PADAWAN. <--geekdom shows through ><
Jan 22 2011 12:13 PM
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pompomwoopssiixxeella0719

Haha, I get what you mean about Taeyeon - her kkabness is jjang. As for your question:
I find that in my story, if I write about Taeyeon a lot, she'll lose that dorky charm of hers, always being on the scene and all. I think she's the funniest because she randomly appears doing something odd, so yeah. Basically, it's quality vs quantity for her.
For the auctio...
Jan 22 2011 11:54 AM
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pompomwoopstephan

I personally like Sooyoung slapping Yoona too. Sooyung pegs me as a carefree, food-obsessed violent person that goes around slapping people lmao.
And what is this 'meng' you refer to me as? Not only is it poor slang, but it offends who I am as a human being, and my eyes. LOL j/k.
Your feedback is deeply appreciated. When you laugh, I laugh. It's a mutual benefi...
Jan 22 2011 11:48 AM
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pompomwoopMelancholicJester

OMG AT THE END I WROTE: UPDATE SOON! HWAITING! And SSF cut it off. Just goes to prove that even the site hates the cliche LOLOLOL
Jan 22 2011 11:36 AM
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pompomwoopMelancholicJester

And pray tell who are these enigmatic voices you speak of? LOL you sound like yer high. Considering you know what 'China White' is I wouldn't put it past you LOL j/k
Speaking of updates, where is yours you mole?
I reckon you struggled to write that cliche 'review', if it is even classified as one. I think you wrote the second half much easier. Okies, I'll leav...
Jan 22 2011 11:35 AM
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pompomwoopMelancholicJester

And LOL at your sarcasm for the disgusting sentence. Even over the net, it works lmao. And yes, before you ask, I'm going to fill up your wall LOL.
Going back to my justification/explanation:
I was adamant on not describing too much to make it seem fast. Like, Yuri asking herself why it was so hot etc. As for the end, I left it ominous ie. implying Sica is going to bs...
Jan 22 2011 11:25 AM
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MelancholicJesterpompomwoop

Well, yes, the smexual tension is expected and glaringly obvious. xD
But my crappy romance radar was sensing some... errr, tenderness? Platonic romantic feelings? I dunno. It just seems to me that they don't know each other well enough for that. Maybe what I categorized as platonic was really an offshoot of YS's physical attraction. I suck at being sensitive.
OMG the character limit T-T
Jan 22 2011 11:24 AM